i knew you'll fail :)

i knew you'll fail :)

A Poem by Asb

feels weird to you

i smile as you pass by


u felt happy

for every tear

that left my eye



now you are drowning 

in that same ocean


which is full

of the rivers

my eyes cried

each night



and i' am sorry

if there is no one

to take you to the shore

and you look at me with pleading eyes

and am sorry this time i'll deny



you told me not to 

come back

now i feel

you were so right

i am so happy to

leave that filthy life



each day i tried

to protect you from that fake world

you told was your life

now it seems that world has shattered

and your are  picking the pieces 

with your broken hands

and your tears fail to fall

because they are all frozen inside



your bruised heart is

pumping venom now

so i don't have to hurt you

because hurt is on it's way

to cut you



and today i just don't feel sorry

for you

because baby i told you

on that painful night of mine




those days i failed for you

those days will surely come to you   !!

© 2012 Asb


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Nice I like that the world on play of the that famous saying 'What goes around, comes around" and I just love the last two lines you let shine "Those days I failed for you, those days will surely come to you! Nicely done it reminds me of the song jar of heart how the hearts he left full of tears came right back at him. So well done and I like how you placed everything.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

yes, a good example of 'what goes round, comes round'
...and your tears fail to fall
because they are all frozen inside...this is well described...that numbing of emotions that ends up blocking all future feelings. a kind of suspended grief. You captured this so well. Thankyou.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this!! Especially the last 2 lines, great write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


4
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1185 Views
32 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on February 23, 2012
Last Updated on February 23, 2012

Author

Asb
Asb

delhi, new delhi, India



About
I come here because its a place with soul,serenity and friendship....now 24 i joined wc when i was 21....met so many amazing people and soulfull writers.....its a stress buster for me.... I love ever.. more..

Writing
25 years 25 years

A Poem by Asb


you'll be mine you'll be mine

A Poem by Asb


Message Message

A Poem by Asb



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..