amazing in every single way <3

amazing in every single way <3

A Poem by Asb
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strictly for those who feel love is a magical feeling :)

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i love it when you talk with your toes

come to me when am all alone


i love it when you say with your eyes

the way you look at my soul deep inside


i love it how you speak with your heart

the days when am all torn apart


i love the way your fingers touch mine

that feeling so divine


i love it when you walk when am there

it's like it's only me and you there


i love the way you always say yes

just for my smile you care


i love when you drop those hair

a beauty beyond compare


i love how you grab me in your arms

a bond beyond all charms


i love the way you kiss on my head

like the angel from my prayers 


i love it how you hold my hands

the pain seems to fade away


i love it when you cut every call

just talk to me when am lost


i love the way you make me laugh

all those days when am falling apart


i love the way you force your care

more and more it's everywhere....


baby am a fool

don't deserve you but you're there

i feel it but am a fool i never say

i love it when you're there

i feel you every where



just dnt know how to say

you're my night and my day


and you're just amazing in every single way <3 

© 2012 Asb


Author's Note

Asb
i know it's simple....but sometimes simple is the best in letting our emotions out :)
xoxoxoxox....

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not simple at all!..it captures those tender moments we all take for granted. Most people can say why they love someone, you have took time to think about it a great deal. The second stanza was my favourite, but there was much in the other lines too! Thankyou.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Simple yet deep, Your poetic flow here even tho not complex became a romantic display of beauty. Wonderful job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This truly radiates the magic of love, and all the romantic feelings that create a spark! Thank you for sharing a very heartfelt piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The poem is hopeful and beautiful. Flowed like a song. I like the positive feel and the desire of your poem. No weakness in this outstanding poem of love. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


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AK
That was so sweet and tender. Your way of expressing your feelings is wonderful. Awesome job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have a very lovely touch for poetry. Have you ever considered writing chapter to a novel? I think you'd manage that quite well, you can count me as a reader. I like this very much :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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