amazing in every single way <3

strictly for those who feel love is a magical feeling :)

i love it when you talk with your toes

come to me when am all alone

i love it when you say with your eyes

the way you look at my soul deep inside

i love it how you speak with your heart

the days when am all torn apart

i love the way your fingers touch mine

that feeling so divine

i love it when you walk when am there

it's like it's only me and you there

i love the way you always say yes

just for my smile you care

i love when you drop those hair

a beauty beyond compare

i love how you grab me in your arms

a bond beyond all charms

i love the way you kiss on my head

like the angel from my prayers 

i love it how you hold my hands

the pain seems to fade away

i love it when you cut every call

just talk to me when am lost

i love the way you make me laugh

all those days when am falling apart

i love the way you force your care

more and more it's everywhere....

baby am a fool

don't deserve you but you're there

i feel it but am a fool i never say

i love it when you're there

i feel you every where

just dnt know how to say

you're my night and my day

and you're just amazing in every single way <3 

Author's Note

i know it's simple....but sometimes simple is the best in letting our emotions out :)
xoxoxoxox....

Reviews

[patricia]

not simple at all!..it captures those tender moments we all take for granted. Most people can say why they love someone, you have took time to think about it a great deal. The second stanza was my favourite, but there was much in the other lines too! Thankyou.

[Katarzyna Slade]

lovely poem

[Raven Starhawk]

The color concept here is magical. It relates emotion and pure intention. It was beautifully written.

[Paige Allison Willmont]

It is simple, but best :)
Great work. Made me smile :)

~Paige ♥

[paradise]

very cute

[Leslie Philibert]

Good work,the repeats give it a nearly musical energy.I wasn`t too sure at first about am instead of I`m, but the more often I read it the more I liked the usage, very young, a bit SMS, all in all lots of things to enjoy here.

[Cassie Fraga]

aaaaaawwww... how sweeeeet is this!!! lucky is the one you pen this for!! GREAT READ!!

[~Lizzy♬]

Yes, the emotions are directly out. The emotions you put into the poem was extraordinary. Was it simple? No way! No one's poetry is simple. If it has a close meaning in your heart, nothing is simple.

[Tamia123]

There was nothing "Simple" about this! You captured all the feelings we have when we're in love with someone in one amazing poem! This is so beautiful and different (in a good way) from all the other love poems and stories I've read! Good Job!

[Xhiljola]

simple yet touching! nice job :)