amazing in every single way <3

strictly for those who feel love is a magical feeling :)

i love it when you talk with your toes

come to me when am all alone

i love it when you say with your eyes

the way you look at my soul deep inside

i love it how you speak with your heart

the days when am all torn apart

i love the way your fingers touch mine

that feeling so divine

i love it when you walk when am there

it's like it's only me and you there

i love the way you always say yes

just for my smile you care

i love when you drop those hair

a beauty beyond compare

i love how you grab me in your arms

a bond beyond all charms

i love the way you kiss on my head

like the angel from my prayers 

i love it how you hold my hands

the pain seems to fade away

i love it when you cut every call

just talk to me when am lost

i love the way you make me laugh

all those days when am falling apart

i love the way you force your care

more and more it's everywhere....

baby am a fool

don't deserve you but you're there

i feel it but am a fool i never say

i love it when you're there

i feel you every where

just dnt know how to say

you're my night and my day

and you're just amazing in every single way <3 

Author's Note

i know it's simple....but sometimes simple is the best in letting our emotions out :)
xoxoxoxox....

Reviews

[patricia]

not simple at all!..it captures those tender moments we all take for granted. Most people can say why they love someone, you have took time to think about it a great deal. The second stanza was my favourite, but there was much in the other lines too! Thankyou.

[Madalyn Beck]

I love how this is really taking in all the tender moments shared with someone special! This part was definitely my favorite.

i love it when you say with your eyes
the way you look at my soul deep inside

When you can see the love in their eyes, it's beyond compare. Great write!

[Asb]

so glad you liked it....thanks yeah!!

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautifully touching, hearfelt write. Nicely done.

[msharma]

The poem reflects the true meaning of love, the moments are enraptured with emotions.

[Mad Hatter]

so sweet :) Not simple at all. This just captures the real reasons why we love the person we do.

[Amila Jay]

Love the write, wonderful indeed:)

[....]

Ever so sweet and wonderful, such a knack for song writing.
Love the flow and rhyme scheme.

[Manpreet]

These are the words any lover would like to hear. The magic is evident of a deep love inside the heart of the writer. An amazing piece beautifully written.

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

This is very nice!!! Beautifully written.

[FelicityAllona]

i love when you drop those hair
a beauty beyond compare

-my favorite line :)

^^
simple yet it really express your feelings :)

[EMMIE]

It's really not that simple and the flow is so easy and supreme. There is such meaning and feelings in this one. Good job!