fall for me again..

a song on a broken lover's plea <3

these tears in my eyes

i can't stop

it's always you blame and i cry

you never stop

i always wished that you fly and i fly

we don't stop

the life where you say and i say

we don't stop 

where you wish and i pray

we don't stop. . . .

so baby fall for me again

i never wanted this to change

and please don't go away 

i never carried this to hate....

the time when you played and i smiled

we never stopped

those days when you cared 

we loved hard

it never stopped

all those nights we wished under the shooting stars

when you came

and we kissed at the bus stop

and these tears in my eyes

i can't stop

you just want me to stand there and

but i can't stop

these feeling in my eyes with you there

they don't stop

i never changed

am still the same

how can i stop...

so baby fall for me again

i never wanted this to change

and please don't go away 

i never carried this to hate....

when you blame me for everything that went wrong

my heart cries

and it stops

when you say that it's all

it's our last stop

we can't go where we started

we have to stop

my soul refuses to hear and 

it won't stop

i'll walk to you everyday

without a stop

even if my eyes drop

their last tear drop

why you are walking

just look back

and please stop

i'll come to you

through far fields

and roaring rivers

and i would never stop....

and these waves in my eyes

they never stop...

so baby fall for me again

i never wanted this to change

and please don't go away 

i never carried this to hate....

please fall for me again :(

Reviews

[Shane Blackheart]

Sad and lovely at the same time. I've always believed that it is possible to write poetry and songs without having to be cryptic and complex, as you've shown here. There are only a few things I'd change about this, only a few lines, but beyond that you've expressed your emotions successfully, as you set out to do, and you did it well.

[Cancelled]

Hey, I can actually put this to music and write this out so, with your permission I have already come up with a good melody to go with this song. May I have permission to put this up on FB and then copy you on it? If that is okay, please email me on here! Thanks Really well written by the way! I loved it!

[misscb]

Such a emotional and beautiful write...

[EMMIE]

sounds like a really cool song you should put a melody to it and post it on youtube

[emilythestrange]

can i sing this?i'd love to give it a try,but i need some music.if you agree then ill work on it.xx

[Jordan's Back]

A wonderful, Heart stirring Song that brought me to tears.

[~Lizzy♬]

So sad, but filled with so much emotion. You have the heart talent of a poet! :) Good job!

~Lizzy~

[AK]

Aw! That was so sad and emotional. Great write!

[patricia]

A nice rendition of unrequitted love. especially the idea of never carrying it to hate. Well penned. Thanks.

[MetBySunlight]

Lyrically written and so emotional. I agree with Emphasis, I reckon if you put the right tune to it, it would make a wonderful song (: