we will survive :)

a song to give strength to your love that you're there that you care <3

the bad days come

but don't feel  numb

there are crazy nights

there are soulless frights

there are darkest hours

and the dooming nights.....

but don't get a tear

cuse am always here....

so baby just talk to me

i am here to take your

misery

and

baby don't get low

we'll fight to the core....

and our time will arrive

and yes we'll survive....

we will survive....!

it's long path for that hope

every way seems wrong

each road seems lost

but god only helps

the brave souls

so we won't stop

till we catch our hope....

so don't fade away so easily

there is more to this life than miseries 

and don't cry like the weaker kind 

we are the ones with a will to survive

and we'll be there till oblivion

even if problems count a million

and we'll show the world our 

reckless side....

cuse they think we have a fear full mind....

so baby give me your smile

cuse it's been a while

since i felt alive

hold that ocean in your eyes

cuse deep in it's depth

i am somewhere inside....

and just hold my back 

i'll rush you to the other side

where

happiness is waiting to grab you in arms

love is waiting to kiss on your palms

faith is waiting to open your eyes

and

care is waiting to take you away

so baby just talk to me

i am here to take your

misery

and

baby don't get low

we'll fight to the core....

and our time will arrive

and yes we'll survive....

we will survive....!

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

I like the colors you've used. My favorite shades of pink =) This is better than the last one I read. It's a nice topic you have written about. Nice way you've written it, too. Very little grammatical errors this time. To be honest, it doesn't sound much like a poem to me. More like a dance song actually :P I know, it's crazy...Anyway, keep improving!

[patricia]

hold that ocean in your eyes. Beautiful. A nice poem offering a hand to hold, and a giving heart. Thankyou.

I love this piece. So sweet and full of loyalty! Nice job on this one, I really like it!

[misscb]

I loved how in depth and emotional this poem is... Well done!!!

[Cassie Fraga]

like a lovers plea.... very nice flow, almost like a song... GREAT JOB!!