we will survive :)

we will survive :)

A Poem by Asb
"

a song to give strength to your love that you're there that you care <3

"

the bad days come

but don't feel  numb

there are crazy nights

there are soulless frights

there are darkest hours

and the dooming nights.....




but don't get a tear

cuse am always here....


so baby just talk to me

i am here to take your

misery

and

baby don't get low

we'll fight to the core....

and our time will arrive

and yes we'll survive....

we will survive....!


it's long path for that hope

every way seems wrong

each road seems lost

but god only helps

the brave souls

so we won't stop

till we catch our hope....



so don't fade away so easily

there is more to this life than miseries 

and don't cry like the weaker kind 

we are the ones with a will to survive


and we'll be there till oblivion

even if problems count a million

and we'll show the world our 

reckless side....

cuse they think we have a fear full mind....


so baby give me your smile

cuse it's been a while

since i felt alive

hold that ocean in your eyes

cuse deep in it's depth

i am somewhere inside....

and just hold my back 

i'll rush you to the other side


where

happiness is waiting to grab you in arms

love is waiting to kiss on your palms

faith is waiting to open your eyes

and

care is waiting to take you away



so baby just talk to me

i am here to take your

misery

and

baby don't get low

we'll fight to the core....

and our time will arrive

and yes we'll survive....

we will survive....!

© 2012 Asb


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Nicely done, touching write. Simply inspirational.


Beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Inspirational piece.keep going.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a beuatiful write, Inspiration at it's finest. I enjoyed this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These are some beautiful songs. I loved the flow of thoughts and your style is becoming one of my favorites.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the flow of words and the desire to assist another. I like the strong description and the feel of a song in the beautiful and hopeful poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


A wonderful, Inspirational Write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is great and has the feel of song.. it flows very well..x

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh those stanzas were perfect as they flowed right into one another! Very well done :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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That was beautiful!
Hold that ocean in your eyes
That was my favourite line. What a wonderful way of describing it!
Great work, keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it (: so beautiful and has a nice flow!
My favourite lines:
'Hold that ocean in your eyes
cause deep in its depth
I am somewhere inside....'


Posted 12 Years Ago



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