love or just a lie :( [ a song for the broken hearted ]

i ask to the sky tonight

why it's not raining

why it's not raining

cuse it's hard for me to cry tonight

all my tears are dry 

this time i've been waiting

waiting 

waiting for you to end this fight

and my night seems all black tonight

you're not fading

but i am failing 

how good you're in faking

telling all these lies

and playing

playing with my heart

with my heart 

that is always paining....!!

your cold war seems moving on

and you don't seem the one i've known

you call

and talk in yes and nos

never feels like

you want to hear my voice

you smile

yes you smile

only when am not in sight....

so i ask the sky tonight 

why it's not raining

cuse it's hard for me to cry tonight....

this wind seems so harsh tonight

harsh

yes

and i want it to stop for a while

cuse it touches my heart tonight

my heart that is bleeding

yes it's been bleeding all the time

and these stars seem so far tonight

remind me of that lovely night

you and me sitting under the moonlight

you told me

am the star of your eye

feel like am burning tonight

feeling so much heat in this cold night

as  i walk....snow is falling

on the ashes from my eyes

you were a traitor in the making

all the time

when i was praying....

i thought that love is kind

u told me it's always a lie

so why don't you hate me

cuse it's better then breaking

it's better then failing

failing

to find your love

your love which is not more

then a lie  :(

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Read like a song. Nicely done! Very sad, though. Almost brought me to tears. Nicely penned.

[Amila Jay]

Makes me wanna cry, lovely song:)

[Jordan's Back]

Wonderful Song!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

When love turn to war. Hard to find middle ground. A powerful poem with a sad story. I like the description and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[MetBySunlight]

Wow so sad, it's cruel how some people can do that to others. I like this very much (:

[hmm]

Wow, this is so wonderful, I love the flow.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

you my friend would be an awesome song writer..........this is wonderful.

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

Emotional and sad, great write!

This. Poem.
I just love it so much! Normally I don't like sad poems, but this one is gorgeous. I love the message. So many people can relate to this poem. Good job!