diary of a lover <3

remembering my first love :)

love to look at that innocence

every time you look at me....

the cushy touch on my heart

and you hold my beats

my head in your hair

that heavenly feeling

in that gentle breeze...

love those days

when i lie on your lap

and you just look into me....

walk in the spring

those early days

in that lonely street

hush you said

kissed my hand

and disappeared

inside me...

holding my hands

in those nights

when you went inside me

your voice so serene

like a lovely lullaby  

forget my world

and those hurts

when you sat 

besides me

every time i was low

you fought the world

like the angel from my dreams

the trust you gave

saying my name

every night in my ears

and the prayers you prayed 

closing those eyes looking at me

i love your every single move

i love you like a 

never ending dream

two lives in one one soul

thats what we meant to be

.

.

.

.

lost in you

you lost in me

it's all i want to be

Author's Note

for all those who have faith in love...even if their heart was broke :)
xoxoxoxo

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

First loves are always special, they make you feel like you're on top of the world. This beautifully touching. Nicely done, Asb.

[Jordan's Back]

Terrific, Mesmerizing, and wonderfully Deep!

[Cassie Fraga]

**gasps** that just.... wow.... I am totally in awe right now... you have painted such a beautiful picture of the moments shared... FANTASTIC WRITE!!!!

[Christina]

This is so adorable, especially the last three lines, "lost in you, you lost in me it's all I want to be". It made me smile, thank you for sharing!

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

Lovve is the best... Even if your heart gets broken. Wonderfully written :)

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

Hey buddy, a nice poem!
I think you would like make a little correction in the last line.... It should be "It's all i want to be"
Rest assured it was a nice read!

[KristahGee]

Fantastic job, it was very well written. :) I really like the last few stanzas! It was great overall

[DepthWriter]

"To be of one vessel, is to experience the beauty of life.... to be serene within its walls... is to develop, evolve and dream. "

Well done~

[hmm]

sad heart tugging piece, makes one realize what they have. Amazing write, Touching!