why am i here

a song...! just to let out what was there inside....from so many years...! will update it little by little :)

it was all decided 

it was all decided

then why am i here

why am i here

why am i here

 here....

playing by their rules

am all stucked inside

no desires no will

to survive

the reasons are gone

frightened...

am mourning inside

you always want me to be

what you want me to be

every day i try

to live like you like

to dream what you dream

to see what you see...

so why am i here

so why am i here

why 

am

i

here

the day i first cried

saw this world with my eyes

brought into this life

forced on me

everything you liked...

everything you liked...

so why am i here

why am i here

why

am 

i 

here

you pretend like it was all my wish

but now i realise it was all a miss

you faked everything is alright

but now i find it was never right

it was never right...

so why am i here

why am i here

why am i here....

.

.contd...! 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The question in this poem is asked by all of us many times in a life. We wish to be in a better place and situation. I like the flow of thoughts and the question in this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Great write. Certainly these are common thoughts that run through everyone's mind from time to time. Nicely done.

[paradise]

very nice song
:)

[Pi Cee]

To live and give life.

[Tate Morgan]

I have found all is answered in this question the moment we have a CHILD

[Cassie Fraga]

questions that sometimes life never answers... **uuuggghhh** the madness of it all...
you did a great job with this, the word play was AMAZING!!!

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

Good song... i ask myself that often.

[FelicityAllona]

it's simply amazing :)

i often asked myself too why am i here? or what am id doing here? sometimes what should i do??


lots of quetion..but no answers... :(

[J. J. Nightingale]

None of us know , why we are here exactly .. here in this family .. here in this job .. here in this country .. Not every situation is perfect, or even tolerable ... We are challenged at every turn, what we do , and how we react , is the true test .. Rise above what you can not accept .. And choose your master ..

interesting .. Jazz

I love this poem so much! I tend to feel the need to ask "why am I here?" sometimes, too. I love your choice of words, such as in paragraph two: "playing by their rules
am all stucked inside
no desires no will
to survive
the reasons are gone
frightened...
am mourning inside."
Great!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

A nice poem which gives me an insight into your thinking.
Why we are here? It's a question everyone asks; the answer to which is very simple- "to serve"
The "you" person whom you are complaining to never interferes. He leaves us to live our own lives..... It's we, who have to find what we are here for.... Whom we have to serve.... What should we be..... No one really knows.... It's time only who has a say....
A nice poem, posing some in-articulated questions.