two lovers <3

a never ending love tale....... xoxoxo

holding her hands

he is fighting the world

catching her tears 

in the rain of blood

taking his pain

she whispers in his ears

love don't get low

we'll make it through

and love it's alright

it's alright

they'll give us their lies

but we'll not hide

there is always a tomorrow

there is an end to each sorrow.....

her innocent eyes

and his brave smile

their pure souls

and beautiful minds

her face in his hands

on all those hard times

his head on her lap

in all those lonely nights....

their love grew deep

with every single fight

feeling of care

like a small child

all those times in the rain

with each drop falling in the ocean

she'll catch those drops

feel it on her palms

holding him

telling him

this is god's shower

for their lovely life.....

with every sunrise

he would kiss on her eyes

looking inside to find his life

telling her

there is no one else

or he would die....

those days with friends

they always like.....

but now life has turned into a fright

all those people

stabbed them behind

feeling alone

struggling to survive

holding their hands running from life

she tells him 

love don't loose hope just wait this night

sunrise will come with a new life

hiding his pain

he held her tight

kissing like a heaven's sight....

standing in the mist 

of the world so cold

feeling the chill through 

their bones....

facing that cruel night

on their own...

taking their sorrows

towards the shore

and they ran they ran

towards the brighter side

for their peace

towards a new life

they had faith

.

.

two lovers

their love

would never die . . .  .    :)

Author's Note

read it like it's a scene where two lovers are left alone to fight in the world....!
they remember their old times...and give strength to each other...and tell each other they'll not loose hope till the end !
p.s
love to all :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem of love. I like the many strong statements in this poem.
"and love it's alright
it's alright
they'll give us their lies
but we'll not hide"
I like the flow of words and desires in this outstanding poem.
Coyote

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Wow. Beautifully penned write. Brilliant piece.

[Amila Jay]

wow, 'in the rain of blood', a beautiful poem indeed:)

[Manpreet]

Another great piece again! beautiful subject, great use of words, nice moments captured. Simply awesome again!!

[~Lizzy♬]

Oh this poem! I loved the statement it was for. :) I also loved the way the words and stanzas were together. It didn't look too sloppy at all. Great job! :)

~Lizzy~

[Paige Allison Willmont]

This was a beautiful poem. :)
Great write

~Paige.

[Christina]

I love the message behind this poem, you are able to capture the steadfast love and loyalty these two lovers share, it is quite inspiring. Thank you for sharing.

[Reece Medhurst]

That was very well written and very well constructed. I like it :)

[Jordan's Back]

This poem shows alot of inspiration and Love. It also stimulates the Imagination and sences. Wonderful write.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I loved this one. The imagery is very striking and complimenting with the poem itself. Very vivid and intriguing at the same time. I loved the way you have concluded it, nicely done! :)

[Chelsea]

I loved the story that went along with this! Sweetly written, anf it created images in my head.. I read this almost like a song, and it was a great song! Nice work :)