i am sorry but i will leave :(

what if i leave tonight

will we meet again

what if i say goodbye

and never come again

what if i stay away

will you remember me.....

but

i am sorry i will leave

it's what you want from me

i am sorry i will leave

to show you that

i am the one

you need

so this is my last song

i think my last goodbye

and i hope that you know

that i don't want to go.....

i am sorry but i will leave

it's what you want from me

i am sorry i will leave

to show you that

inside

i bleed.....

my life was full of fun and lusts

but with you it's all broken trusts

my life was so lovely life

and i think you never realised

that you have changed for the worst

just giving me pain

with all your words

inside me there is something burning

it just want to reach out

i just want to shout out

i was marching through the darkness

looking at the sky

i walked this distance

'but never found my life

the cold wind is blowing

crashes with my eyes

but i still walk to find a reaso

to stay alive

so i am sorry i will leave

it's what you want from me

i am sorry i will leave

to show you that

i am the one

you need

so it's my last song

and yes my last goodbye

and i know you know

i never wanted to go...... :(

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts and desires. I like the many question raised in this poem. When we leave someone. The door can be closed forever. Hard to re-open a door closed with sadness and pain. No weakness in this amazing poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Manpreet]

nside me there is something burning

it just want to reach out

i just want to shout out

i was marching through the darkness

looking at the sky

i walked this distance

'but never found my life

A very touching piece, of course straight from the heart, It got me all emotional! Great piece. ( check for typo

the cold wind is blowing

crashes with my eyes

but i still walk to find a reaso

to stay alive

An amazing piece straight from the heart. It got me all emotional. Great write!

[Cassie Fraga]

very nice flow in your way of words... such a sad song this sounds like. confronting and questioning one can never go wrong with when writing and this is why... it makes a BRILLIANT PIECE!!!

[Paige Allison Willmont]

I really liked this poem I can Relate.

~Paige♥

[patricia]

I liked the line, but I still walk to find a reason to stay alive. It is always the things we dont talk about that are the real issues. Thankyou for your clever poem.

[Ruth]

This is heart breaking!
Really well written as well, made me really feel!
xoxo

[hmm]

So very nicely done, i could see this as lyrics.
Awesome!