last goodbye

well you know

it's hard to say goodbye

all these feelings are so hard to bind

and i can't believe that it's over

and i have to leave tonight

everything looked like a dream

life 

like of a bird flying free

with you i was better 

feeling of zeal

chasing

dreams of my life

but today

i just can't help

somethings have to end even if they 

make us cry

so baby it's my last good bye

i'll take these memories in my eyes 

and feel them when am not alright

those times

we were together

all those cute fights

that so wonderful feeling

when you were by my side

so give me your smile

cuse it would be the last in my life

touch my hands again

just want to take that feeling

that you were there every time

i cried....

as i'll not pass this way ever

so let me live today forever

just sit besides me

let me see you one last time

say something in my ears

as today i want it clear

cuse this voice

would be my last reason

to smile

and

i would say this forever

you made my life divine

but now,but now 

i just can't help

somethings have to end

even if they make us cry

and it's getting harder

every time i look behind

so baby ,baby

this is my

last .............. goodbye :( 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm amazed at the writers from India. Can write in many languages with great skill. Your poetry had strength and story. I could feel the emotion and sadness in the words of this poem. A strong and sad ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Cassie Fraga]

=' ( sooooo sad.... ouch!! I can feel it in these lines.
very well penned.

[Tamia123]

This is such a powerful piece! It made me feel like i was there with you expericening those feelings with you. Amazing! Great piece! Good write!

[~Lizzy♬]

You have a very beautiful way with words! I love this poem and what is was about. :)

~Lizzy~

[hmm]

This is amazing, so emotional and so well written.

[FelicityAllona]

..it is really hard to say goodbye...

this is awesome :)

more power ^^