loose you again

a lover is telling that hopelessly he is trying to bring her back but she is just not getting what he wants to say :(

i've lost and i found you

again

again

but it feels like

the ways have changed

again

you think that you are holding me fine

but i feel like i am falling

again

i loved you more and more

again

but it seems like you want to change

again agaaaiin.....

baby i really hate those days

when i was broken

and an ocean of pain

but you brought back

love through the rain

i love you with all that i can'

but i can see that you just pretend

do you feel that 

was it all just we planned

i hate to say it

but baby am loosing u again

again.....

you feel that you are doing fine

but am fading all the while

you just don't seem to realise

those people you think are by your side

they just fake to make you smile.....

you think am wrong all the time

but i just want to make you mine

you are riding me on the storm

but you are far gone

and i cant stay here on my own

you think it's all going by plan

you think you have great friends

but they all make fun of our mess

and

am feeling shattered and stoned

am paranoic

and i hate to live alone

i know it's hard to accept

but baby am loosing you again

again

i will walk with you till i have strength

till the time i can stand

i want to be there

till the end

baby am struggling

baby am failing

baby am crying

baby am dying

this world seems lonely 

without an end

and it's so hard to breathe in here

i hope you'll take me from here

you feel your world is full of love

but it's with those who just pretend

but when you'll crash

and face your sorrow

u will fall in the end

and you will fail to start

all again

again

and i just want you to come back to me

because i hate to loose you

all

again

again...!

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

free flow works so well in this piece... you did a GREAT JOB!! I can really feel the wanting and yearning for this love again. well penned indeed my friend!! =)

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. A lot of emotion and hope for forgiveness. I like the flow of the story. To get someone back ain't a easy task. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[.........]

So utterly lyrical and flows fairly well. If only I could hear the melody in your head as you've written this. I like the honesty, sort of a ranting way of getting it all out yet you've done it in a nice way. Good write