My Dear Lover

A last letter to save the breaking bond,.... a plea for forgiveness

And i arrive tonight

for i was ignorant and far.....

for the beauty can be seen

only by a true eye.....

Trapped i was, in the shadow

of that dark spell....

with an open eye

wandering like that foolish blind....

tamed by the liars

of hideous minds....

and remember this before 

ruling judgement on our love,our life......

for now i see the truth

i beg forgiveness and i cry.....

the beauty , the brain and your bravery

so precious , so kind

i was scattered

striving towards evil

sailing towards shame.....

born you were to bless

me with your patience 

your gentle avoidance 

of my failures

your guidance 

in my pain

and i stand here crying

thinking of sweet words

failing to come out

as my strength is gone

shaking with shame.../

save me one last time

i am struggling to prevail

just one last push

i will survive this blame....

just that smile

and your blessed touch

for you know

i don't feel judged

but your

decision is my aim...

and i am a coward

breaking all the mirrors

forgetting my face

this is my appeal

my words 

because my face

not worthy of your eyes

till my shame is shared.....

my love, my pearl

my kind soul this is 

my letter to you

the last or the first

the decision is yours

to make

i 

will prepare for my  Fate!

 

Reviews

[Jazique]

Awe that was so sweet, sad, emotional. Best things about most writers, we make the loveliest love letters. Only thing I can recommend in adjusting your grammar problems and I think some of the verses should have more of a flow to it, like it's all connecting.

[Asb]

Thanks for the kind review :)

[Otsana]

This is a lovely read, a very selfless portrayal of love. The ending was strong because the reader is left wondering just like the writer in that moment. Thank you for sending this to me and sorry it took so long to get around to reading it. Good work!

[Asb]

Thank you so much for the review and your kind thoughts :)

[PWells]

This was very sweet and also sad. Thank you for suggesting I come over and read it. So very happy I did!

[Asb]

Thanx yeah :)...sweet of you to share your thoughts

[prachi prangya agasti]

this poem is portrayed with nice theme and liked the last lines
my love my pearl.....

[Asb]

Thanx yeah....appreciate it

[kate]

nice theme! wonderfully written.

[Asb]

Thanks for the review :)

[Matching Socks]

Very sweet, sad and heartfelt Asb.
Wonderful poem.

[Asb]

Thank you for the kind words :)

[stars are far]

that was very sweet and greatly done.. you did a great work here.. keep it up :)

[Asb]

Thank you for such positive words.....i will try more next time

Peace!

[stars are far]

always my pleasure dear

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful description of true beauty and emotion. Your description brought to life real thoughts and life. I like the ending. Left the reader with question of the fate? Thank you for reading and the comment.
Coyote

[Asb]

Thanks for the kind words....always good to get a positive feedback....

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.