25000 Lines

Tonight is my battle with reality
i succumb to my thoughts
and i judge my self rationally
creating my bridge
from paranoia to sanity



and i hear 25000 lines in my head
wanting to get out
but i sit there
waiting for my moment
which would never come
i have not lost it all
but i am sad sometimes
thinking what i could have done
but i get up
enjoy my freedom
to the core
EACH DAY



25000 lines in my head
everyone has their own game



past and present
these are inside this head
holding my future
with a loose thread
now you come
here they go
everyone has a part to play
everything is normal
every moment special
its all inside your head
waiting to get away



25000 lines in my head
everyone has their own pain



now you judge me
and you read my life
how could you even try?
its easy to say
he is bad
or he is sane
Afraid we pray

we forget the eternal truth

HUMANS WE ARE
created for a journey
live it without any blames


25000 lines in my head
everyone has their own blame


those who left you yesterday
and those you met today
now you share your past with present
that's how we're supposed to play
life never stops
the day would always end
and trust me
do something new each day
and life would be a better place to stay


25000 lines in my head which
i cannot say
and it's not just me
it's you,it's her,it's him
we all have are lines
but we
keep them in the shade
afraid of judgement
afraid of blames


now it's time to live each line
everyday
loose yourself in the win

25000 lines in your head
get them out
let's make this life
a beautiful play.....




peace !!

Reviews

[Otsana]

"25000 lines in my head which
i cannot say
and it's not just me
it's you,it's her,it's him
we all have are lines
but we
keep them in the shade
afraid of judgement
afraid of blames"

I think that says it all really and that is why its so important for people to keep writing and sharing their ideas and to give positive and useful feedback.
"You never have the obligation to quiet the hurricane within your chest"

Thank you for sharing this. Great work!

[emmajoy]

Have to say, i prefer less colour .. tis apt to over.shadow the meaning or/and intent of the content!

Having said that there's a sing.song happy reflection in this as if a guideline or spur to carry on whatever comes your way. Seems you have an goal, an aim.. and will, whatever reach it. Wonderful. So hope you do.. if that's what you're meaning.. of course.

[Matching Socks]

Love the repetition in this, really drives it home.
It's got a great flow.

[Coyote Poetry]

"but i get up
enjoy my freedom
to the core
EACH DAY"
A amazing poem my friend. I like the positive feel of your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Asb]

Thank you so much for the review....always good to get kind words from you....

[Coyote Poetry]

It was my pleasure. Always good to read your words.

[Ruth]

This reminds the reader to navigate through life, not all goes to plan unless we engage the plan ourselves, mostly...enjoyed :) xo