revenge

end of silence .... start of revenge

i see bodies in the day

staring at my soul

deep through my brain

i feel hurt,

i am lost

i am a ghost again

running in my veins

pushing through the blood

there is rush of the venom

from the kiss that you gave

i howl and i scream

i am a ghost again

eyes in blood

black in the shade

i run through the darkness

with the demons from hell

there is hate in my heart

from my toes it starts

i bleed and shout

i am a ghost again

yeah .... i hate the light

i disgust the day

for the night i prepare

burried in the darkness

i start my revenge

flying in the fire

i am a ghost again

i serach for your soul

you can hide in the day

but the night is mine

i will seek my revenge

every night

i ride the carousel

near that empty lake

tonight is the end 

of your dirty play

i will find you soul

you are my prey

buring in flames

i am a ghost again

i will release in your blood

the hate that you gave

so run to hell

it's now the place you will stay

i will rule tonight

i will take my revenge

and you will curse the day

when you crushed a boy

with betrayal and hate

sitting with the beast

waiting for tonight

i am a ghost again

AND

this is my revenge

Reviews

[jennifer little]

nice write beautifully said keep up the good work

[Me]

great! Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing

[Sometimes Blood]

Flows like a river of creativity.............. fine penning

[Jack Kennedy]

Man that second verse is crazy good! Overall this is a splendid write.

[Asb]

thanx yeah :)

[Jack Kennedy]

You're welcome!

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

A truly dark piece of poetry, I am really impressed. Thanks for sharing. Ps, I have lots of revenge poetry over @ WritersCafe.org/MrDunne.

[Asb]

Thanks so much for the review :)

[stars are far]

Revenge... sounds good idea..but i never done it ..i dunno why..
but well done... your poems sounds to me like a horror movie XXD..
well done

[Asb]

Thanx for the review.... :)
revenge sonetims its good

[Madalyn Beck]

Revenge really does bring out some intense emotions. My favorite lines would have to be these:

"i will release in your blood
the hate that you gave"

Good work here. Keep it up! :)

[Asb]

thanx for the input :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Revenge is never fruitful. To take life make you the same as the killers. A wild and frightening ride in your words. We live in a world with many ghosts. Revenge keep hate and violence alive and well in our world. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the open ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Asb]

thank you for your input sir :)
always glad to read your review!