wake me later !

the ways you never thought

are sometimes the ways 

you should have thought

the times you never want

you have to live them 

without a thought

so wake me when my time has past

because being alive i could never have last

and till then don't even whisper life

because it's existence i'll deny....!

and don't wait for me on the other side

because he sent me alone

and alone i will go on his side!

...... Asb

Author's Note

Reviews

[Kaitlynn A. Black]

I gets the idea this is about living the life before transcendence to a higher plane of existence. In life... that we wish not to acknowledge, is filled with much trash, so we shall look away from the living and wait for that ending day, where elevation to a new realm is our salvation.

Nice Poem :)

-Odds & Ends

[Leslie Philibert]

I really like the premise on which this poem is built - an original, clever poem, well presented !

[Sirius King]

really nice! i really like the last few lines

[Danalla]

LOVE IT!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a contemplative compelling thought stimulating read indeed. thanks

[Ruth]

Intriguing piece!
There is such a feeling of liberation and yet stifling quality to this...I guess we are alone at the end as much as the beginning...brings a whole new meaning to not fearing anymore!
xoxo

[Manpreet]

Nice ope you are doing great!

[emilythestrange]

Awrsome! Awesome poem, awesome song, ( I'm a BIG Paramore fan) , and again, awesome poem!!!

[Tate Morgan]

Now i like that idea alot One correction Since you use the word "way" which is singular in the first line you should use the same singular "way' in the second

[Asb]

yes....i'll correct it sir

[Asb]

[Coyote Poetry]

The ending will be a surprise? To my knowledge no-one had return to tell me they have found heaven or hell. I like the thoughts and logic in the poem. I believe each journey will have a place and I hope we can find peace alone or not. Thank you for the amazing poetry. Made me think.
Coyote

[Asb]

thnk u sir for the review