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Busy life, hectic schedule makes you forget all the memories which were ones the best time of your life. But when those memories again stand in front of you ,you refrain from losing it gain.

Years has passed,

Things are changed.

 

Trying to bury past in time,

Working hard and drinking lime.

 

Unpredictable life and surprises all the way,

Dark office,a room lighten and late night stay.

 

Phone ranged,

No phone calls it was decided.

 

Three in the morning,

Can't stop myself from answering.

 

Hello he said,

It was Him,

Years had passed

But did'nt forget his voice.

 

Numbness went through all over,

I remember our last date on Smiling tower,

Heart beat stopped when he spoke my name,

Forgot to answer him; voice strong and same.

 

Talked further; afraid of losing him,

A new sun arise,A new beginning,

A light he was destroyed all darkness,

Breathing again I lived, feeling alive.

Reviews

[Grace Marie]

Your grammar could be improved, also I don't understand a few of the lines "working hard and drinking lime", "a room lighten and late night stay" "voice strong and same". Those are the ones I'm really struggling with. Also "phone ranged" should be "phone rang". Sorry I'm pointing out only the negatives, this piece has some great qualities. I think this poem has serious potential and with a bit of editing you can really bring out the best in it. :)