home

my mother thinks i will become nothing

but than again she was wrong before

 

i will be a w***e before i return to my home

this static place

i know if i will remain confined iside my family

i will reamin sutpid and wierd

 

i hate being here.

Reviews

[GEMINUS]

Simple and sweet, but still possesses a deep meaning.

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

I quite like this but you've made a couple of typos, nothing major. You've put "iside" on the 5th line instead of "inside". And on the 6th line you've put "sutpid" instead of "stupid". lol