Tremble

Delicate words with longing�

I long to see you…

as the flower longs for sunlight.

 

I need your voice,  

as a whisper in the dark

in the sound of a guitar

 

upon my trembling heart.

 

Reviews

[Hollywood]

It's short but you get your point across. I liked it.

[Juan]

That is the kind of love I would imagine anyone and everyone in the world would want to be projected onto them. Very nice work

[Jibey]

Simple, says what you wanted to say! Less is more.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful!

[Brianna Brie]

It does sound like a soft plea for the one you love. Thanks for entering it into the Missing Her, Missing Him contest.

[Seriana]

Ohhh, this is so sweet! Longing, indeed. And you said it in such a short piece. VERY well done. Love it!

[Jules]

it is short and sweet! the comparison describe very well what your feelings are!

[UpComesDown]

short sweet and sad. very good

[Larissa G.]

I thought this was a gorgeous way of saying something without the cliches interfering with what this could do by itself.
Wonderful.

[Rain]

I thought this was a beautiful description of longing. I wish it was a couple stansa's longer, but I loved it as is,too. Rain..