Muse

I'm so f****n' happy I got my muse!

The sun burns the desert sheet...

 

Which direction should I chose,

my weird muse?

 

I embrace the silence as the rain

drops touch the roses

waiting for the voice to raise.

 

Let us dance forever in the freedom

of creation, wraped in beauty

and never tell me

that we have to go to sleep

,beloved muse.

Author's Note

Thsi is an homage to my gift of writing, and an expression of the plesure I take in writing.
Thx for reading.
You can say whatever you whant, ( as long as you're polite lolz ) I'm gonna return the review anywayz.

A.M.

Reviews

[Mr. Misanthrope]

I like the magery of rain falling on roses. Very beautiful! Looks like your muse decided to help you with this one. I can feel a certain unknown aura around this amazing poem. It has an ethereal beauty about it.

Also, I was skimming through some work of yours, and I realised something: You Have Style! And with style, you can impress your readers and keep them wanting more.

Well done!

Luke

[InkBlack]

I loved the lines concerning the roses and the rain, mostly because I have an obsession with roses :)

It was short, but good. It had a good rythym and great imagery outside the roses and rain stanza.
I loved it :)

[Wondering Mind]

"Let us dance forever in the freedom
of creation, wraped in beauty
and never tell me
that we have to go to sleep
,beloved muse."
This stanza was a favorite of a very well penned write.

[Seriana]

"Let us dance forever in the freedom
of creation, wraped in beauty
and never tell me
that we have to go to sleep
,beloved muse."

Adela, this is a most wonderful tribute to the fabulous nature of writing! Or whatever the muse is for someone. It is awesome to click with one's self over the clarity of flow. Beautiful!

[Periac]

this was a great feast filled with strong speech for a wonderful friend and talent....great write....

Let us dance forever in the freedom
of creation, wraped in beauty
and never tell me
that we have to go to sleep
,beloved muse.

awesome and luminating such a truthfulness......
a nice walk to my favs

[Larissa G.]

I enjoyed this thoroughly, especially for the great ideas within its simplicity.
One complaint: I felt like the first line was out of context. It didn't really work with the rest of the poem, for me anyway.
Great work otherwise. :)

[PasDeChat]

Nice.. there ya go! I thought that is the one you intended. My spelling isnt too hot, I must revise my own work often! I really like this you have talent!

[Rhine Wolf]

i like it! flowing and a lovely tribute to the Muses!

Well done!

Blessed be Fallon

[Pax Analog]

"Which," "choose," "wrapped" -- because I like this poem, I have to be copy editor re spelling corrections.

It's a very cool sensibility re writing, to embrace and salute your own love of writing.

Your sweet exuberance re expression makes me smile. ;-)