Word with the daemon

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After years of peace, Dileree finds out that the strange being inside her had decided to put an end to it's rest. She felt herself fade away in evil as the darkness fell over her weakened soul, and her inner desperate cry could only silence her old but not forsaken enemy.

 

Feeling the weird shadow approaching her soul, Dileree decides to speak.      

 

 

It’s getting worse. I do not know what to do… 

  

Please, leave me alone.

Please, please.

Do you promise me that you won’t come again? Why do you remain silent? Tell me.

I do not speck lies, I do not have a reason. I know what you are. You are there still, I know.

What do I have to do to make you leave. What do you want? You are not a part of me. Your place is not here.

It is better now. My pleasure hurts you? Why do you keep hate for me? Why are you there? Why do you hurt me? What… inters do you have in this? Make me understand.

Is it the power? Why can’t you understand the love? Yourself?

 

 

                                    Take my pain.

 

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Surprisingly Dileree is overwhelmed with calming silence, then her spirit loses it’s anguish hearing the daemon speak.

 

Have you forgotten Dileree? Who protected you all these years? Who turned the pain to cold and the past to nothing? Who gave you the joy of cruelty?

Do you remember hahaha…

 

                               It was you who made me.

 

Author's Note

Anything wrong?

A.M.

Reviews

[chord0]

suspense, very interesting plot. "Why do you keep hate for me?" sounds awkward, perhaps "Why do you keep hating me? or "Why do you continue hating me?" Deliree is probably talking to the daemon inside her, it seems. Nice beginning for a novel, perhaps religious or philosophical. Needs expanding.
good luck
chord0

[Rhan F. Sydney]

Gret piece....Thank you for the submission...

[Aileen]

no i like. vrry nice peace of work u have here. nice job on it. keap up th great work.
luv ya
ur friend Aileen