Soul

when you feel like crap and you don�t know why

Why do you

 …love

 …hurt

 …care

 fall?

 

 angel with sharp wings

 

,when your dreams take shape in front of you

 

and you pushed sorrow far beyond the darkness  

 

Why?

 

when you know that what you seek lies inside

and nowhere else.   

 

Author's Note

Sure feels better after I wrote it. I think that writing is a good cure for sadness :).

A.M.

Reviews

[Bryce Simonds]

I'm glad you felt better after you wrote this, that's the reason why I write poetry; to express my feelings. That's also why I don't write new pieces for contests, it's because I can't unless I have some feeling at that moment that I need to express.

This was an interesting write, I haven't really seen many poems put in the format you have put your poem it, but it was interesting to see, so it added to this poem.

"angel with sharp wings" confuses me, but it sounded good, haha.
Thanks for sharing.
-Bryce

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautifully written and laid out

[Larissa G.]

It's a start; but unfortunately that's all I really see so far.
If you edit it let me know. :)

[Leran Vakem]

This is a really nice poem.
I enjoyed it
Leran Vakem