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A Poem by Adela Muresan
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Just a thought.

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Death comes like the new dawn.

 

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Choice and bitterness

 

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born from the nothing

inexplicable vibration

 

you cross the bridge of

materialized ideas

of evil and good

becoming one another

by your own  rule

 

you bleed

you kill

you change

 

and look behind seeing truth with lateness

 

Death comes like the new dawn.

 

© 2008 Adela Muresan


Author's Note

Adela Muresan
Thx for reading =), I hope you enjoyed it.

A.M.

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A new beginning that was both born and killed at the same time. You explain life and its different choices that every normal and abnormal person has to go though in order to understand a days breath. no matter how many are taken away however, a new one is there always to take its place, therefore the cycle isn't broken, it just changes its order.

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o_0 i have to disagree with everyone about the typed letters. it drew me in and made me feel the intensity of the poem, i think its wat makes it good. when i saw them i felt like i had to read the poem qucikly and the entire poem together leaves u like whaaa which is interesting. yay!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A new beginning that was both born and killed at the same time. You explain life and its different choices that every normal and abnormal person has to go though in order to understand a days breath. no matter how many are taken away however, a new one is there always to take its place, therefore the cycle isn't broken, it just changes its order.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm not sure how the name of the poem and the poem fit together and whats will all the typed letters in between the first few stanzas?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not sure why it is called carousel and the all of the typed letters between the verses is distracting.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Adela Muresan
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Heya, I'm a 18 year old chick for Romania, studying first year economics in college. I dance while I put my clothes back on the drawer. I like late night net-surfing , reading and reading and read.. more..

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