Silence

Just a little thingy for a contest.

let go, and…  

 

Fly high

in the dusty universe

of the gray empty

walls

 

sinking deeper in the maze

of thoughts and images,

crafted by hundreds

 

In the darkness I understand

the spirit’s loneliness.  

Reviews

[Anima Inspired]

This is a truly great metaphor for the "human condition"...I can see alot of the human psyche flowing from these words...almost like we are being closed in by the world, and it's only in the darkness, the quiet, that we find peace enough to speak to ourselves...at least that's what I got from it. I love the simplicity of this...the form was just right. Nicely done!

[Joe]

Good work! Good luck in my contest. ~Joe

[We are young.]

I liked it a lot, great writing skills though short its very meaningful

[Puzzle-bot]

Ilove it! thanks for enering it in my poem. sorry I can't do a long review, gotta go!
'in the darkness, I understand,
the spirits loneliness

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

wow awsome

[C.L. Wilson]

at first I thought it was random stanzas but than I looked deeper........and found......something that I can only describe as interesting. You combine seemingly random thoughts but they are actually deeply connected. I like your style.

[PasDeChat]

Deep and thoughtful, yet short and to the point!

[karagb83]

Wow. This is now my favorite poem. I will read more. Oh, please review my writing now. It would mean a lot to me!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Your poem is good, but it's not a clerihew. Check out the rules of the clerihew and resubmit something.

Sal

[Angelic Darkness]

This poem reminds me of flying...like in a dream I've had.
Exploring, feeling free. This is elegant...AD

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"In the darkness I understand
the spirit's loneliness. "

This is very raw and passionate! I loved the feel behind it which is so strong..For me the closing lines outstands from the entire poem, they are giving such a huge impact on the reader's mind!
Great work.