Beautiful soul

Hmm�kindda� narcissistic

Like the light in darkness

And spring at winters end  

 

Your soul glistens in the enigma

of your eyes

radiating

beauty

beyond a poet’s verse.

  

Beloved reflection…

 

Reviews

[Larissa G.]

It's a very short yet very artistic mastery of words. I admit, it's so short that I think some expansion would be good for it. Providing other images to describe the soul that are not sight (user the other senses) would probably make it feel even deeper than it already is.
Keep writing. :) You have lovely ideas.

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful, with such an insightful twist! That we would see beauty and worth within our own reflection... So often the mirror is a place of horror! May we see that we hold such life within us that truly is beyond a poet's verse... :)

Craig

[Kia]

Very cool...simple yet powerful!!!

[shadadakiya]

very awesome!!!!

[Angelic Darkness]

Love it! Simple, yet held a powerful hold on the
reader. Everything seems more beautiful in the reflection
of a lover, a intimacy only shared between the two. AD