Beautiful soul

Hmm�kindda� narcissistic

Like the light in darkness

And spring at winters end  

 

Your soul glistens in the enigma

of your eyes

radiating

beauty

beyond a poet’s verse.

  

Beloved reflection…

 

Reviews

[Larissa G.]

It's a very short yet very artistic mastery of words. I admit, it's so short that I think some expansion would be good for it. Providing other images to describe the soul that are not sight (user the other senses) would probably make it feel even deeper than it already is.
Keep writing. :) You have lovely ideas.

[poet2angels (lynda)]

Lovely!

Beautiful

"radiating

beauty

beyond a poet's verse. "

I love this lines!
Ty for entering this lovely piece

Lynda

[chord0]

Wonderful beautiful love poem. Somewhat religious.
great work
you could write of poetry on webook.com, free to publish.
good luck
chord0

[Kitty]

Short but awesome!!!!

This is a stunning piece!!!! Yet again! :)

Josie

[James K. Blaylock]

Another wonderful piece! Keep it up, my friend.

jkb

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I love the poem for it's art. It's very, very well constructed. I especially liked this line ...

"beyond a poet's verse."

... that's perfect. For a poet to say that the beauty she sees is beyond a poet's verse borders on genius.

[Dani California]

Absolutely we should love ourselves!
As long as we aren't prideful about it..
placing ourselves above others.

Self love is the key to loving others...

Bravo!

[Annalisa]

A little narcissism can be a good thing though. So few people can look into a mirror today and like, much less love, what they see. I envy the narrator, and love the beguiling beauty of the poem. Good work.

[April Child]

We are taught early on not to be in love with ourselves but as we mature we have to learn to love ourselves or be very unhappy in our own skins. I like this, it's bold!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Nicely done! Well written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah