Intensity

A dangerous escapade.

Fire burns in your eyes,

 

your curse embracing me.

 

As our desire lifts us up, my soul releases a

 

guitar morn.

 

The beautiful strong beast is taking over.

 

I waited for this moment for so long…I find it hard to believe you are finally mine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I love you with every core of my hart and soul. I am yours.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Take me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shred me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Change me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Live for me,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Never let me go.  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My words were left unspoken, as we drift in the dance of love.

 

This world is lost, and all that’s left is this tender tremble of this

 

                        supernatural phenomena.  

 

I lay exhausted by your side…

 

Your arms wrap around me, and I feel like home.

 

Embracing me harder,

 

as your soft adoring kisses touch my skin.

 

I love you…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I know that ,,tender tremble,, is an expression error, but I prefer to leave it that way.

A.M.

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

Very nice piece, but the fonts became so small in later and it's hard for me to read... Guess I really do need that glasses after all lol

Anyway, I can understand why there are small fonts like that, it's because of the whispering and I know why there are so much of the spaces, because it's like taking a real deep breath between speaking the lines...

So, it's really great tho...

[Pax Analog]

You minx, I copied this to Notepad, so I could read the otherwise infinitesmal text. ;-)

Sweet, primal, yummy, smile-inducing, of course deeply erotic. Too soulfully hot and delightful to worry about the typos -- what the hell, lovesexy is messy!

Thanks for sharing, darlin'.

[An owl on the moon]

Powerful in word and expression! The fragments form vivid movement in the mind of the reader. Beautifully done!

Craig

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a great write but very hard to read the very small print. I think we both know that things other then fear can make you tremble. LOL. maybe some people don't get it but I do. It would help if you enlarged the
tiny lines and make it easier to read.
Debby

[MandarinOranges]

I think intesense is an understatment here. But that is exactly what true love is!
And if "tender tremble" is an expression error, than we need to do something about the English language :P
Beautiful, stunning-INTENSE!!!!

[Dorchadas]

beautiful piece Adela... strong admissions of passion and emotion expressed with such honesty and intensity

[The Mad Prophet]

This world is lost, and all that's left is this tender tremble of this
supernatural phenomena.
I lay exhausted by your side�
Your arms wrap around me, and I feel like home.
Embracing me harder,
as your soft adoring kisses touch my skin.
I love you� (Yes I cheated so I can read the rest)

Very well done, I like this last verse, I had to decipher it, but it flows so well.

[Kelsmiles]

Your arms wrap around me, and I feel like home., I feel like that with my fiance, good writing .

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Amazing. Very well written. Poised and refined. only thing is the font, it's too small. though, in a way it is original, and goes with the emotions of the piece. thanks. i added you.

kena

[James K. Blaylock]

Wonderfully written!

jkb

[Jon]

I don't see why that is an expression error - I really liked this - it does what it says on the tin - it brings home a great feeling of intesity - takes the reader to that place that we all strive to be

"This world is lost, and all that's left is this tender tremble of this
supernatural phenomena."

A great way to describe such an indescribable feeling.