Poison

About the gifts of love.

See me,

 

Lie to me

 

Pretend

 

Place the necklace of love onto my neck,

 

Enjoy your conquest

 

Let your demons out of their cage

 

Make the necklace turn into a serpent

 

Posses me

 

Use me

 

Kill me

 

Love me

 

Lose me

 

Taste my poison

 

Die inside

 

and hate me.  

 

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

Very impressive on expressing on giving yourself up like that. Making me feel like I have nothing else left to lose and just go on to take that kind of risk anyway...

Anyway, I've enjoyed how you've created the stanzas like that, so simple, yet a bit too much. But, it's still all good there, so no worries...

[Dorchadas]

Intense poem... very intense.
The anger and hurt is palpable.
amazing imagery and brutaliy honest...
Love it Adela

[Antonio Valentino]

Unfortunately, that sums up alot of relationships really well.
Really liked the format, and your sentiments were right on.

Wonderful job!
Rich