No fear. No tears. No doubts.

No fear. No tears. No doubts.

A Story by Adela Muresan
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A reminder.

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- Yo ! Oligo-lamers !! Come line up and kiss my a*s!!

                     

  This is a piece dedicated to all girls who ever gave a f**k about how some man tried to get them down.

 

I am not an air-headed Barbie.

 

We are beautiful noble and intelligent,creatures because:  

 

1.     We are guided by our souls not out cots.

 

2.     We get better grades.

 

3.     We smell better.

 

4.     We make people love us without pretending.

 

5.     We can love without wanting to poses or change.

 

6.     We care more about the insides than the outsides.  

 

7.     We don’t rape man, like some of them rape women.

 

8.     We don’t make a lot of noise for nothing.

 

9.     We make good mothers.

 

10.  We do not mess up people’s computers.

 

11.  We do not have the need to torture someone to look cool in front of someone else.

   

     12. Only we can see the radiant beauty shining from inside an ugly person.

 

    The only reason for witch I ever thought of myself stupid, was that I actually care about what they do or say.

 

   It’s worth keeping your chin up because:

 

  1. You owe it to yourself.
  2. We can let some low dawgs rule the world.
  3. We're the clean side.
  4. Every time you fall you learn how to fly back to the surface.
  5. No one can get to you if you learn how to keep kool.
  1. Because if I ever reach the top, I would hate to be surrounded by stupid kids holding their …

 

All that men want from us is sex… how stupid do they have to be not to want love?

 

Of coerce there are exceptions … like one man in a hundred.   

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Adela Muresan


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A good and thoughtful rant, though I saw a few grammar errors, they are below.

1. We are guided by our souls not out cots.----------> Is cots a typo? I have a fealing you meant c***s but I could be wrong....

7. We don't rape man, like some of them rape women.---------> you need to change man to men so that it is the same number as women

Good job! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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First let me say 'i'm sorry' for taking so long to read this...I don't get on here as much as I used to.

Ok, I liked the way you laid this out, and the kind of 'stick it, we're better' vibe it has...

But I have to say while true for the most part...there are deff. places that have major oppositions.

Not every woman makes a good mother, just ask Dave Pelzer...
There are a lot of females who are so fake, manipulative, and just all arround terrible...sociopaths who get off on makeing other people's lives a living hell.

Though the overall picture you paint is vivid...though one sided...
While I agree that decent men are rare, they aren't as rare as 1 in 100.
overall good job!
I'm sorry whatever happened to you that led to you painting this picture though, and hope things change for you! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice! Although one sided, I can see you have been unfortunately harmed by the male species, for which I understand you anger, and am sorry. but do not be so quick to judge okay, it more that one man in a hundred that is good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, there are women who rape.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I guess I'm a feminist in the same way as most modern men and women are nowadays: I believe men and women should have equal rights. However, the way you generalise women here is, in a way, sexist itself.
Not all women make good mothers. A lot of women can be b*****s, and torture others to look cool themselves. Most women are motivated by their sex drives, they just don't realise it the same way as men.
Not all women smell better than men. Girls only statistically get better grades than boys; the whole gender can't take credit for something based on individual merit. Etc etc.
However, this a positive, life-affirming piece for women, which must be nice for some to read.
I agree that love is better than sex.
I liked the interesting lay-out.

I agree with Annalisa [featured reviewer]'s grammar suggestions.

Nice work.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, this is a different piece for sure. :) Good write. I understand what you're saying. Good job on being honest about how you feel...it wouldn't have been the same if you held back. Although, I do have to say...all of the one's who find that "one in a hundred" are very lucky and I'm sure the guys are worth waiting for.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Such truths! How I enjoyed reading this, many things I never thought of.
Once I thought about it you know, I don't think I've ever heard about a woman raping a man, not an adult one anyway.
But beautiful piece, I really think you got out a good word with that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

haha... its a very good rant... i really enjoyed it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A good and thoughtful rant, though I saw a few grammar errors, they are below.

1. We are guided by our souls not out cots.----------> Is cots a typo? I have a fealing you meant c***s but I could be wrong....

7. We don't rape man, like some of them rape women.---------> you need to change man to men so that it is the same number as women

Good job! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

YEAAAAAYA You go girl,,,,,,,,,,,ahhhh yes such wonderful creatures you are.
:)

Matthew

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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