Trapped

Trapped

A Poem by Adela Muresan
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If some thing is worth hating � than that thing is the bloody plague of love, which devours our harts and souls,leaving us looking behind at all the misery it caused, knowing that it�s not gonna lave very soon XD

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This cruel thing called love,

Has a bizarre way of choosing its victims.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Bet you didn’t expect this, did ya?

© 2008 Adela Muresan


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powerful... and full of emotions!
although i don't agree!!! love is like a bird, beautiful and free! and comes and goes and only you can make it sore if you try o hold it in a cage... but it will not sing anymore! and you can kill it at any time...
and in a strange way, it can also be beautiful to see a bird fly away, even though we can't fly after it, we can always dream about the places it goes... :)
And most people think of love the same way as you do: they feel victims of love... As for me, i'm always prepared to jump into love as i love to be in love!!! I shine and become more beautiful and younger, and brillant when in love!! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow very moving powerful words

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and to the point Nice

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

L*O*L!
almost everyone has that view of love at some point...so i understand where your coming from, but TRUE love, ahh...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it! Even though it is short, it is very powerful, and I agree completely!! Great writing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very powerful!!! I loved it... thx 4 sharing it with me!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

powerful... and full of emotions!
although i don't agree!!! love is like a bird, beautiful and free! and comes and goes and only you can make it sore if you try o hold it in a cage... but it will not sing anymore! and you can kill it at any time...
and in a strange way, it can also be beautiful to see a bird fly away, even though we can't fly after it, we can always dream about the places it goes... :)
And most people think of love the same way as you do: they feel victims of love... As for me, i'm always prepared to jump into love as i love to be in love!!! I shine and become more beautiful and younger, and brillant when in love!! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Succinctly written yet much conveyed. I agree as to the other comments below that your personal comment detracts from the poem. Perhaps you could edit it and place your comment in the Author's note section.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and in-your-face!!!! And oh so very true!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Josie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am shocked by the unexpected-ness of your poem!

good job

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, I always go by this old motto; "Always expect the unexpected" so, I hate to say this, but I'm not surprised how this piece turned out to be, BUT I have to say that I'm very impressed with it...

Very short and simple, yet so many meanings in it, so it's all great tho...


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Adela Muresan
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Heya, I'm a 18 year old chick for Romania, studying first year economics in college. I dance while I put my clothes back on the drawer. I like late night net-surfing , reading and reading and read.. more..

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