Trapped

If some thing is worth hating � than that thing is the bloody plague of love, which devours our harts and souls,leaving us looking behind at all the misery it caused, knowing that it�s not gonna lave very soon XD

This cruel thing called love,

Has a bizarre way of choosing its victims.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Bet you didn’t expect this, did ya?

Reviews

[angelina neves]

powerful... and full of emotions!
although i don't agree!!! love is like a bird, beautiful and free! and comes and goes and only you can make it sore if you try o hold it in a cage... but it will not sing anymore! and you can kill it at any time...
and in a strange way, it can also be beautiful to see a bird fly away, even though we can't fly after it, we can always dream about the places it goes... :)
And most people think of love the same way as you do: they feel victims of love... As for me, i'm always prepared to jump into love as i love to be in love!!! I shine and become more beautiful and younger, and brillant when in love!! :)

[wolfsshadow25]

wow very moving powerful words

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Short and to the point Nice

[Jason Henry]

L*O*L!
almost everyone has that view of love at some point...so i understand where your coming from, but TRUE love, ahh...

[Jane Doe]

I love it! Even though it is short, it is very powerful, and I agree completely!! Great writing!

[Pinky]

very powerful!!! I loved it... thx 4 sharing it with me!

[Lily1111]

Succinctly written yet much conveyed. I agree as to the other comments below that your personal comment detracts from the poem. Perhaps you could edit it and place your comment in the Author's note section.

[Kitty]

Short and in-your-face!!!! And oh so very true!!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Josie

[rougey]

I am shocked by the unexpected-ness of your poem!

good job

[Joseph - Michael]

Well, I always go by this old motto; "Always expect the unexpected" so, I hate to say this, but I'm not surprised how this piece turned out to be, BUT I have to say that I'm very impressed with it...

Very short and simple, yet so many meanings in it, so it's all great tho...