My heart is breaking

My heart is breaking

A Poem by Tessa Danielle Guise
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this was for my fiancé Adam. I wrote this cause I was hurting.

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When my heart breaks I fall to pieces,

You destroyed me,

you broke me into a million pieces.

I am shattered,

I am in pain.

Why did you hurt me?

why did you lie to me?


These questions still remained unanswered

As I wait for Thursday night.

For you to call me

So I can figure out what you want.


I hope you want to be with me still

I love you, I miss you.

I know you have broke me

But I still love you...


So please stay

As my heart is breaking

I'm crying out for you

I never want to lose you

Tell me now

As my heart is breaking.

© 2016 Tessa Danielle Guise


Author's Note

Tessa Danielle Guise
This was because I was going thru somethings with Adam.. I am still in love with him

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Only with time does the pain of a true love lost lessen. Only with time. a sad write and the first time a heart is broken is always the hardest to fathom and the most painful. like a dream it's broken.

Posted 8 Years Ago


My dear little Wordsmith,
You have bloomed into such a beautiful little artist. I am impressed really, I didn't know you had so much talent with writing. It must run in the family, obviously! Lol!

In all seriousness, you did an excellent job conveying the pain, that little butt head, made you feel. In fact, this piece made me want to cry. I am so very proud of you. A few grammatical mistakes, but you are learning and growing into a wonderful writer.

I love you Little Sister!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

Thank you Ash'e. Ireally appreciate your review. I just get my writing from you. you know you are a .. read more
♥ Ari Skye ♥

8 Years Ago

Anytime little Sis... I appreciate you saying I am an inspiration, You are an inspiration to me as w.. read more
Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

awe! I love you too mommy!!
This is some great stuff you got here. It is good to a good poem with some heart to it and meaning. :)

writing 5/5
meaning 5/5
theme 5/5

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

wow.. thank you double T. I greatly appreciate it. Thank you for your time and your very kind review.. read more
Your poem is nice, don't worry true love always finds a way!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

thank you for the review and the advice as well as your time. I really appreciate it.. :D
Writer at last! Sky ~

8 Years Ago

Welcome most :)
Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

:) Thank you
Hope that things will turn better..Take care.... and beautifully expressed this feelings....Keep it up ...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

well thank you so much for your kind review. ANd it did work out. thank you so much for your time!
I wish you the best in love and life. May your hopes and dreams be met with your love. Very painful work, but good for the soul. I have one spot that I will mention and understand it I feel works either way, but it was the only thing that went bump in my head. :)

"I know you have broke me" to "I know you have broken me" or "I know you broke me". It may just be me since your work is beautiful. Peace be with you going forward in your life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Willard Wells

8 Years Ago

Advice on love, welcomed or not and of life. Words spoken in anger are seldom the truth when spewed .. read more
Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

thank you so much for the advice. I really needed that. that gave me a new perspective on love and l.. read more
Hope and wish things turn out for better.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

yes they did. Thank you for the review. It was all a misunderstanding. We worked it out and we are m.. read more
ah, matters of the heart. nothing has inspired so much poetry or created as much drama. Hope things got better.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

yes they did. thank you for your very kind review. It was all just a misunderstanding and we worked .. read more
did yall break up tess? if he did break up with u, ill kick his a*s.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

well thank you so very much! I love you sissy!
Luna Chan

8 Years Ago

I love u too baby girl just be careful
Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

ok. I will :D
this poem is really awsome !!!! but i an left with some question . what was gonna happen that thursday night ? any way the work is really great !!! i have hysterical time reading it !!!
So please stay
As my heart is breaking
Im crying out for you
I never want to lose you
Tell me now
As my heart is breaking.
these lines are outstanding !!! but there is a mistake .... " it should be i'm instead of im " any way it's just a minor mistake !!! your poetry is great
keep working and keep it coming

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

oh ok. thank you for your time. I will try to mess with it so more. lol
zunie frost

8 Years Ago

That's good but i must admit the theme of the poew was really deep
Tessa Danielle Guise

8 Years Ago

well thank you so much

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Tessa Danielle Guise
Tessa Danielle Guise

winamac, IN



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I'm Nikki Cobain's little sister. My real name is Tessa Danielle Nordyke.. I'm not much of a writer but I do love to read... I am 15 years old & I enjoy reading, walking, & studying about animals... I.. more..

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