Night Reign

When we are cursed with pain, nostalgia, misery and haterd

Let the dark thrashing night reign,

Slip into misery fain,

Let me bleed tears, wail within,

Recall you and curse heaven.

 

An ill heart of a twisted heathen,

A shrine for all the demons,

A mirage in a void of death,

A grave for my love, the myth.

 

A Gothic necropolis

Of red seething necrosis,

At every unknown grave weeps,

Howls at every corpse asleep.

 

A ghost of a fading being,

A deep shame his heart fleeing,

Let the dark empty night reign,

And the void within howl again.

Reviews

[Dye]

I truly enjoyed this Adam. Not only does the pain come across in this, but I feel like it is written to show that the pain doesn't end. It keeps going on and on.

[MOON]

Poignant , haunted write , I like the play on words and the expression of loss. Lovely.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, moon.
I missed you around.

[Mr.Boffin]

eerie, dark, love it! good job :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, Randall.
I am much humbled.

[writing mojo]

a word crawl of such night in the color of dirt, you spawned a specter in these sectioned off plots begging for light to expose the skeletal structure of the dark arts....great piece

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you for your amazing comments, I like feedback on how the reader felt.
Well, I am not sure if this specter seeks light, but he surely needs salvation.

[MoriartyMesa]

Now, i may be wrong (known to happen at Black Jack 1 out 6 times) but this reminded me of something, live night moves, trying to make some front page driving news https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bqwfaxYAH5o

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Well, maybe! lol

[Mel Lisa]

this was a nice one. I love the rhythmic feel to it. kind of eerie too, but pleasantly so.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

It's when love rots into hatred, grudge and remorse...

Thank you, Melecia.