Sonnet V - No tears in heaven!

Inspired by "Night"'s faithful poems, maybe its not related.However, It hit me after reading his poems Thank you my friend!

Insomnia took her place on our bed,

Her pillow is bereft, tearful and cold,

I brooded at it as my psyche fled,

And one scenic saintly dream did unfold.

 

In Eden I awoke, a piece of grace,

Between pink trees I walked, and looked around.

Polychromic roses I did caress,

And found my dear love sitting near a pond.

 

At mere sight of her my longing heart bust,

And fast her kind eyes softly cradled me.

She suavely said as my feelings combust:

“I’ll wait for you here till eternity!”

 

I roused in tears that I wiped with a grin.

Because there will be no tears in heaven.

Author's Note

Please review!

Reviews

[Ohhhwillow]

Who knew that love could bring us such pain, although this is sad it is also serene, there is a satisfyingly feel echoing from this piece from the feeling of sudden safety surrounding its closure, that is complimented by your delicate use of vivid language. Greatest respect Adam

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, Willow for your great and beautiful review :)

[sue]

awww. I like the line I roused in tears that I wiped with a grin. Love the song tears in heaven too. :)

[Tarry Franck]

This is so touching! Love mixed with pain, I feel!!! Love your song of choice bec/I believe you are right...no more tears in Heaven.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you, Tarry!
i hope so

[Tarry Franck]

You're quite welcomed

[Angela ☄️]

This is very touching and beautifully written! Every word pulls me in more and more into a feeling of happiness. You have done a very well job. :D


-Angela-

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you, angel! :)
I am honored

[Dalia]

This is a very lovely dream for sure, there is no such place like heaven indeed
This is another charming sonnet, great job

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you, Dalia! :)
I am honored

[vspjaguar]

gave me goosebumps as I finished reading this piece with "tears in heaven".Lovely poem, thanks for sharing.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you very much! :)
I am honored

[Sam Gregory]

Well, i cant really add onto what Jacob said. Good write, another great sonnet :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, Sam
Jacob's words were great indeed
Much appreciated!

[Sam Gregory]

:)

[LA Lorena]

Loved this sonnet, and I love Eric Clapton. A winning combination all the way.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Glad you did, LA :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh wow! This sonnet deserves more views and reviews. I read your description and "Night" is a wonderful writer. I see how you would want to have him as your inspiration. His work is inspirational. Your words took me into the side of the writing world where I love to be. Heaven is such a beautiful palace promised for those.It's sad to lose someone close to you but when you know that they're going to a better place those tears fade away quickly. Earth isn't innocent and it's filled with so much hatred and sins. We live in a cruel, messed up, filthy place. Don't you agree? I guess the real reason someone cries of losing someone, is because that person kept them happy in a place where happiness isn't really common. Back to your poem, I do love the theme of the sonnet and everything that you have shared with all of us to read here. I am glad that you asked for me to read this lovely piece! :) Great job!

I loved this part the most:

"I roused in tears that I wiped with a grin.
Because there will be no tears in Heaven."
Side note: This is truly beautiful.

Ashley Rivers-Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, Ashley!
I am really glad you liked it
I am very humbled

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome! No problem! :)

[†Tracey†]

A place where all that is..is so true tears are not needed.. the true bliss.. We can only dream about it but we know it to be true.. Excellent write..xo

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you! Much humbled!
and thank you for your wonderful words