Death omen

How all prophets have been met with. However, here... they dont listen!

I wake up at the spark
From a coma in the dark
Where am I? Where was I?

And shadows cross my sight
Like silhouettes in the night
And loud I bode and cry

Did you see the dire blast?
Dread death will thrash us fast
And all of us will die

Then waves of laughter troll
Noises that covers my call
"I am telling no lie!!"

An omen I foresaw
On a ruin a black crow
Heralding the last sigh

Lest you die, come with me!
Take my hands unto safety
To god’s command comply

 

“Loon you are certainly!

To claim such absurdity”

And they mocked my try

 

I kept warning for naught

Humanity favor I sought

As I raised my outcry

But alas they are gone
God’s fateful wrath fell upon
Crimson and silent they lie

Reviews

[Em]

I really like how you write. so good.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you! although this is quite ordinary :)

[Em]

ordinary is spectacular

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you again
I am humbled

[Em]

:)

[Tarry Franck]

This is an amazing write :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Glad you liked it

[Tarry Franck]

My pleasure

[Angela ☄️]

A very interesting poem indeed, it made me think of fallen angels for some reason. You are a talented poet from what I've read friend. :)


-Angela-

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you
I am humbled

[†Tracey†]

The cry of the crow.. the thin veil between heaven and earth.. I loved this and you sealed it well with your last stanza..xo

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

I like to give ravens many forms
one as lost souls came to warn
maybe god's signs of doom
guardians of hades and many more
thank you

[Deron Alexis]

i find it amazing that people would deny prophets after seeing signs and acts of god on their behalf the funny thing is that history has a way of repeating itself this was well captured well done

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

History repeats itself because the people are the same at every era!
thank you!

[Faria C]

Wow, this is awesome, thanks for posting ^-^

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you for reading

[Faria C]

YW, I was feeling down and your poem cheered me up some (=

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Ever so glad! :)

[Faria C]

C=

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Tell me if I can help more

[Faria C]

Aw, that's nice of you, thanks. Keep up the good work in writing =3

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

WOWWWWWWW! Adam ! beautiful , magnificent !
But just to be sure that i got it , you are talking about the prophets when Allah sent them to guide the humanity to the light , but most of them denied the prophets
call , right?

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Indeed! :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Yeah , i love it !!!

[sue]

good read :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Honored! thank you

[LA Lorena]

Another interesting write from you. You seem to write a lot. Do you have these stockpiled in your vaults, or do you never sleep? 4th stanza, 1st line. TROLL? did you perhaps mean toll?

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

I have insomnia = almost dont sleep!
And yeah I write daily lol
About "troll" an english prof. once told me when you say "laughter trolls" it gives the image of people laughing one after another in loud voice just like a troll song... So, its "troll"

[LA Lorena]

okay, that clears that up then. you are usually quite careful, so I was not sure if it was a typo or deliberate.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Indeed! thanks for the note though
if you noticed anything odd please do tell!

[Dalia]

Great poem
And choosing to start it with the questions draws the reader's attention ,
stunning as usual

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, Dalia :)