Sonnet III - Astray!

Sometimes you need to forget everything and just empty your mind and thought

 

That night was mystical and entrancing,

That eve sure had a secret up its sleeve.

I didn’t feel like sitting and nagging,

For morbid, amok thoughts began to weave.

 

I went out for a walk amidst the dark

For I needed to merge with it again

I left my coat and hat and did embark

Through caliginous streets beneath the rain

 

Streets as sprawling as the ones in my mind

Hiding ancient tales, tears, smiles and myths

Their phantoms died, deaden, and lay confined

Tales of life and love, and tales of cruel deaths

 

It’s quite useful to go astray at times

Through roads without burn marks or guiding signs

Author's Note

Don't you think?

Reviews

[Tarry Franck]

Excellent poem - flawless

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

thank you, Tarry

[Tarry Franck]

My pleasure

[Whiskurz]

A very well written sonnet my friend.....Whisk

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you for reviewing
Much honored

[sue]

you are of the same mind we tread places that have so many tales to tell. great write.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

I have lots more to tell, I'll be honored if you stayed close ;)

[Dalia]

Yes of course : It’s quite useful to go astray at times

Through roads without burn marks or guiding signs

perfect description of how we feel sometimes .

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, Dalia
Glad you liked it

[LA Lorena]

I do think! I like the question posed here, and the sonnet form.. You do them very well Adam.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Always interested to hear what you think, LA
thanks for passing by

[KatDarkness]

Flows beautifully, and extremely well-worded, amazing poem :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

I am very humbled... Thank you

[Sam Gregory]

This is a nice sonnet, flows well. It makes me want to write one now haha. Keep at it :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

i am honored! thank you

[Sam Gregory]

haha np