Bitter-sweet December

Black romance is what hits my mind about this one!

In Love and snow I brood so long

In their soft embrace do I belong?

Away from norms of right and wrong

 

I feel devoid when I'm alone

With all my memories of limestone

In dreary nights of December

Wherein my cold feelings gather and dismember

 

I ride the winds that cradles snow

Into a time rift, unto its glow

And the horse of time stops right there

In the dead era our blossoming young story were

 

Where beige and blue adjoin below

The sorrowful sky that runs and flows

The horse of portals let me go

 

The breeze said "Is this you again?"

"I'm just a shadow" I said with pain

“My bleeding heart netted from tears

Pasted whole, gave him a soul, And sent to dwell here”

 

“Your heart is drunk, forsake his command!

In past and woe its fatefully damned!

By her death and blood is fogged,

Revert and know! Your past is evermore locked.”

 

 And so, on love and snow I arouse

Bitter-sweet December, a blue rose

Freezes my soul and overdose

Author's Note

Feedback please

Written on: Iambic meter

Reviews

[LA Lorena]

It's nice to see someone new here who likes the use of rhyme. Most of what gets written here is free verse, which I do dabble in, but my heart belongs to rhyming poetry. Is everything you write so dark? I've heard you laugh, so I know you have the ability to lighten up and you do have a sense of humour ;)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Being dark doesn't mean I dont have a sense of humor
Mainly I am a gothic poet and writer, but I drift aside from now to then

Thank you again for your comment, personally I dislike free verse

[LA Lorena]

I'm just teasing you! I know you have a sense of ha ha.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Ok then! :)

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

You have a wonderful smile btw!

[LA Lorena]

thank you Adam. I do tend to kid around a lot here, so please take what I write in reviews and comments in the spirit of humour.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

I know! And I will

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

Amazing one like always !

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

You are amazing, Hadeel :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Me ! Thank you , you are so sweet ^_^

[AK]

Wow! This is one great poem! I really love the olden feel it has to it and the superb flow of the poem. The imagery of this piece was well worked with. Great write, keep writing!

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you, Akashka!
i am ever so pleased to hear so

[AK]

:)

[BryanaBear]

Great structure and rhythm, I am also love the use of description words and phrases. Nice work!

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

I am humbled! Thank you

[BryanaBear]

You're welcome

[Chaos_Collector]

Excellent work here. You have an excellent choice of diction and the poem has a nice rhythm. Well done. Pen on!

Chaos_Collector

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you! I am humbled!

[Chaos_Collector]

You're welcome my fellow poet!

Chaos_Collector

[sue]

Another great poem. I love how you write.

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarrior-]

Thank you very much! I am really pleased

[Disregarded]

Well done, it is a piece most interesting to say the least, I'm not sure how to describe it, but its majesty is beyond measure, the way you put your emotions , feelings to such limits is outstanding..