Shine

Shine

A Poem by CajunPoet

Wandering into darkness searching for a path,

Wondering which way to go, moonlight's all I have,

Thinking I was lost while the answer stared at me,

The moon was lighting my path, I just didn't see.

 

So it seems I'd already been well on my way,

Now I head full steam to my destiny today

the path glowing bright like the fire in my eyes,

Darkness fades away now that I finally realized.

© 2014 CajunPoet


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went from dark to light quite
beautifully worded.



Nicely penned how there was feeling
of lost then finding the way back to the
light and realization.



Thank you for sharing.


Blessings. Benita

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really enjoyed reading this! Has a nice dark yet light tone to it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very nice. Each line could be broken into two lines so the rhyming emerges strong... but great job. "Darkness fades away. I realize the shine." Could bring back the title to the end to emphasize.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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