Ocean Song No. 7

I think I'm finally home.

 

Sand between my toes

and finally my clothes

suit me

 

the salty skin-tight breeze

agrees.

 

I could stay here forever

with the water

rushing in

then rushing back out

only to return again

 

story of my life.

 

I help myself

down by the seashore

near the ocean floor

teeming with life

unseen before I arrived

 

anchor in hand

a sign

 

my final stand

 

for this is where it ends

in order to begin anew

and it’s true

 

home really is

where the heart feels it belongs.

Reviews

[Eponine Roy]

the heart of the ocean, really. something that always comes back to us as soulful beings and fills us with the rythm of life. very well done.

[ST]

this is a wonderful piece, cristaline and full of calming sounds...word as waves...rythmically swining on each line...beautiful

[Brianna Brie]

Nice flow through out. Interesting title...wonderful poem.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

great piece Ad, sounds like you are adjusting well...

[Lydia Breakfast]

Welcome home Adam. It is thrilling to hear your voice has found its place.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

How comforting to find the arms of the Universe embrace you in your proper place. Wonderfully expressed in so few words. Kudos! Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[M I N D Y]

i love you!!
i am so very happy to see you happy and in your proper place. this poem is everything i've wished for you. clean and clear, hopeful... beautiful.

[Shadows of Sight]

Ah the great one has finally reached the end of his great journey. Stepped into the healing waters of the mighty pacific and has been re-born!

I'm extremely glad you have found were your heart is content. May the Sun shine and the tides be clean and endless for you!

Mayhaps I shall ask the winds to carry my feathers in that direction and join you for a drink with an umbrella in it. ;)

[Fran Marie]

home really iswhere the heart feels it belongs.

So true ~ This is a real feel=good write~ abd enjoyable read~very nice~Fran Marie

[Kiri J]

i havent seen you so hopeful since i've known you. it's warming, heartening.
this is lovely.