Holding On

When your head and your heart just can't seem to agree.

 

I will love you forever

but I can’t love you here,

not nearly enough

for what you deserve.

 

So I’ll wait for you there

where the window

is always open.

 

Reviews

[Eponine Roy]

Simple, lovely, beautiful. I'm glad to have read it, dispite my taking over a year to get back onto the site.

[ST]

I like the simplicity of the poem, the clarity of the message and the beauty of the style

[Amanda Crandall]

very befitting

[Brianna Brie]

Love what this short piece has to say. Awesome!

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

beautifully written - sad in nature
fantastic piece

[Kara Emily Krantz]

oh i love this. so simple. so blunt.... and yet so caring at the same time. an awareness of self and one's own limitations, but also an awareness of the future and the vast greatness of possibility, and hope.

i love it, my dear :)