Drain

Heavy winds thats bleed into me

My flesh has never turned so cold 

my hopeless form 

chemical fragments that interwove 

Carry me above the air

caressed by long black veins 

All I plead means nothing

when in the tethers of mortality 

black shadow waiting for me

I have always known he is waiting for me

to carry me further below and lower 

There is something dark inside that I have never been able to escape

Now I am being led astray

I need no physical thing to make me feel awake

My mind runs into the abyss further than my body will take me

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

very deep this piece.
Seems like you have really written this from your heart and it shows.
It feels great to let your feelings out in your writing :)
Great write

[Blogger]

I like how these words form together. I think you should maybe add a riveting photo though to add to the readers experience. I like how this made me want to read it twice.

[William Tate]

oh this is excellent.....breathtaking little ride you take the reader on