Venus

O'er the ache of mauve shores erotic winds billow long & deep... Her scent drips from the sky onto bare skin, bejeweling my senses - like a tapestry of blushing petals besieged in rhythms of passion.... Whispers of untamed rapture beckons my lips as I descend into her gaze, unto the sea of bliss where I shall forever drown.


- Arthur Crow © 2013

Author's Note

This is 'quote style, taken from my blog. Not formatted for poetry.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Dear Arthur, I must tell you... you have swept me away into "the sea of bliss"...
The Rapture you have weaved is beyond compelling...
(you have certainly hypnotized, Mr. Crow)

A Gorgeous write, indeed... exactly what Venus would adore...~xoxo~;)

Into my faves...

[Arthur Crow]

Thanks gorgeous! It was a fun little scribe to do :) Glad you liked.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I enjoyed it, immensely. xx :)

[victoria]

My planet is Venus. Arthur,

I love your poem Venus!

You truly have a gift of writing poetry, you captured me with your writing and put me in a golden cage forever with your heart and soul!

Victoria

[gabrielle]

what a breathtaking way to describe a kiss and whatever comes after that.

"unto the sea of bliss where I shall forever drown" ah, so much passion.

[Sami Khalil]

I gaze at this poem with appreciation...Bravo..................

[Arthur Crow]

Thank you for enjoying it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............