My Awakening

This love that was gifted, entangeld and twisted,

defined the definition of why I enlisted,

She cried, went ballistic, was pissed, optimistic

I stabbed at this paper with pen as she flipped s**t,"I'll fix this"

But everytime I tried she'd just b***h at 

the fact that I had to say goodbye when I shipped,

How the F**k did you not see

The pain on my face, all the stains on my mask,

Everyday slaved away,

Bloodied hands on the pavement,

Knees f*****g scraped, 

another scar for every single effort that I made,

With these cards on my plate how the tables have turned,

Now the tables you flipped are just lessons I've learned,

Ive been tethered and burned and at best I deserve the return of my heart

to my chest and a cure for this mess a concern that has yet to adjourn 

now I rest to emerge to this Earth I return

Reviews

[747]

Powerful. No bullshit or cotton candy. Very pure and has a good rhythm that makes it easy to read. Great work, and sorry for your pain.

[Acerbus]

I never liked the taste of cotton candy. No, but seriously thank you for the review! And everybody has their pain.