I miss you

I miss you

A Poem by Luka

It had been long
Too long
I couldn't wait for him anymore
was he really gone?
Mirrors now a enemy to show me what i'd lost
and glass a close friend to shake hands with
I miss him
I really miss you
please come back
I'll wait as long as you need me to
if you eventually find your way back
Please darling
Please.

© 2025 Luka


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Terse but honest.
A lot of longing and resolve.
Thank you for sharing this one!


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


"Mirrors now a enemy to show me what i'd lost" woah what a line.
please don't wait for him... find yourself. please...
this is such an honest poem. and raw feelings...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


hi ace also nice poem who's it about? (have an idea but it's probably wrong so I'll just send it to you on our chat)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago



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Added on March 21, 2025
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Luka
Luka

Honolulu , HI



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Hey! I'm a general oddities writer and enjoy making works about all the pain and suffering the world has for me :D. I will almost always write in English but some of my future works could be in Germa.. more..

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