Senses

I feel like a song where the words are gone

A melody without notes

In a place without air

Suffocating and drowning in silence

Where your voice was once shared

All around a field of flowers which I cannot see

The crashing of the ocean waves all around me

I cannot hear them as they crash

I'm losing the fire to my candle

Burnt out without your presence

You walked through the waterfall and when I tried to follow, you were gone

And I was forced to move on

A love that's not romantic, one that's for a family that remains, but is gone

The heat of my flames, burnt out, present, but gone

Author's Note

It's been a while since I've posted anything. Here's a poem I hope you all like it.

Reviews

[Aradhana]

I loved it dude!!!!!!!! there are moments where we feel so lonely that we cannot take it anymore. And moreover when the ones we loved the most leave us....cannot express. Moving on is the only option but still we hope that some other, from somewhere comes..That feeling of emptiness I can understand it! tooo good!

[Ace Jaxon]

Yes, and each day the feeling is still there unfaded and present. But each day we keep going because we can't sit there in the lake of our sadness. If we do we'll drown, so it's hard to keep the balance of healing and continuing on.