Of You

Filling my head with visions of you

Dressed in all blue

I'm really missing you

At night when I dream I can only think of you

Looking at a photo drawn of you

Thinking you're gone like the flu

There one minute gone the next saying adieu

It's hard every time I think of you

Not one or Two

Falling down blue

Tears oh tears for you

I swear I'll get the flu just because I'm thinking of you

Reviews

[Gabby The GAB]

I enjoyed the rhyme , this was quite what I was feeling before. Missing someone really is a lonely one. Well, I hope you're fine now Ace!

[Ace Jaxon]

Thanks Gabby, again I don't know if I'm fine, but taking a step away from everything and everyone has helped. I'm fighting a different battle now along with this one, but I'm still trying.

[poetgurl]

Such a sad little write, but so well written

[Ace Jaxon]

Well I had a lot on my mind, but I'm glad you liked it.

[That1Nerd23]

This is incredible! I can totally relate to this, even so there's something like suspense as you get half way through until the end. Like a pleading. I get that. 100/100

[Ace Jaxon]

Thank you, once again. You always give such positive reviews. It makes my day. Thank you again.