Without you

Without you

A Poem by Ace Jaxon

Without you the sun seems to disappear

Without you the flowers no longer dance in the wind

Without you my heart turns to ashes

Without you I feel incomplete

Without you I feel unwanted

Uninvited and Useless

Where did you go?

Did you leave me behind with the California setting sun?

Without you I’m just pluto

Without you I’m nothing out of the ordinary

Without you, I miss something

I miss you

© 2018 Ace Jaxon


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without you i`m just a drop in the sand

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ace Jaxon

6 Years Ago

A lot of the times indeed we feel like a grain of sand among the billions, or just another drop of s.. read more
 wordman

6 Years Ago

you`re welcome
Being with the right person can certainly lift our spirits and make us feel on top of the world. Likewise separation from the one we love can have the opposite effect on our emotions. Nicely expressed ne.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ace Jaxon

6 Years Ago

Thank you Chris!
Chris Shaw

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.
You express your emotions really well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ace Jaxon

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I try to put in my all 24/7.
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Ace Jaxon
Ace Jaxon

Dassel, MN



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