Rescue

Swimming in the darkness

Glowing brightly

Feeling cold from my lack of trust

Fire burning in my heart

Not of love and not of rage

Welcome to my glowing flame

Candle leading the way

Follow me and I’ll show the way

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Very clever. I liked what you did here. In the beginning you created a scene of sadness and in the end you cleverly personified a candle.

[Ace Jaxon]

Thank you, I've been trying to do that for awhile now in one of my poems, a candle to me is something that represents a lot, but also nothing.

[Najam Us Saher]

I have also written a personificafion on candle titled 'Cold Flame'
Would love to know your views on it.

[Ace Jaxon]

Ok, will do, I'll check it out